Oct. 11th, 2006
creation challenge update
Oct. 11th, 2006 12:03 pmI still owe 3 2 works through reciprocation deals:
pharminatrix
naohai
circuit_four
Please be patient dears, I'll have 'em up soon.
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Please be patient dears, I'll have 'em up soon.
creation challenge: pharminatrix
Oct. 11th, 2006 11:13 pmA note on this one: It was very difficult because of the sheer volume of tropes to work with. I'm best when pithy. So I've condensed a lot here.
In so doing, I've had to go to what I know to be the inner-most parts of you, and skip some of the surface stuff. I may do a second one for you.
Each numbered section uses a different style, and represents a facet I've seen of you.
I.
equine collector;
menagerist
it's only a means
to manifest
you're looking for the formula
to reify your animaux
because they loved you
warm and true
even teeth and blood
will do
II.
reaching for the thread
atropos avatarine
easier to cut
than to be cut-out
which we should know:
it's only your way
to safely find
the pink puppy at the end of time
III.
sifting castle crenellation
for archaic cupcake generation
lightning dendrite in the eyes
you've seen the map of your own mind
striking stone and digging root
cracks and branch and horn to boot
IV.
stylized prosthetic parts
returning to the body
trained in ancient, unknown arts
highly skilled in kanly-
covering the blood on fire:
secret agent, lie in wait
to push the world with your desire
and bring about your fate
V.
And now all forms drop away
now you can embrace it all
so violently ek-static
and timid hiding, compensation ends
A heart so strong and broken
you keep the beat, but lose the time
Minoan, serpentine
arche arche logos anthropos
you will recieve it,
all the testimony
and the wound of separation
will be healed at last
a lass
at the deepest part, a laugh
tears of love
you can hug the puppy forever.
In so doing, I've had to go to what I know to be the inner-most parts of you, and skip some of the surface stuff. I may do a second one for you.
Each numbered section uses a different style, and represents a facet I've seen of you.
I.
equine collector;
menagerist
it's only a means
to manifest
you're looking for the formula
to reify your animaux
because they loved you
warm and true
even teeth and blood
will do
II.
reaching for the thread
atropos avatarine
easier to cut
than to be cut-out
which we should know:
it's only your way
to safely find
the pink puppy at the end of time
III.
sifting castle crenellation
for archaic cupcake generation
lightning dendrite in the eyes
you've seen the map of your own mind
striking stone and digging root
cracks and branch and horn to boot
IV.
stylized prosthetic parts
returning to the body
trained in ancient, unknown arts
highly skilled in kanly-
covering the blood on fire:
secret agent, lie in wait
to push the world with your desire
and bring about your fate
V.
And now all forms drop away
now you can embrace it all
so violently ek-static
and timid hiding, compensation ends
A heart so strong and broken
you keep the beat, but lose the time
Minoan, serpentine
arche arche logos anthropos
you will recieve it,
all the testimony
and the wound of separation
will be healed at last
a lass
at the deepest part, a laugh
tears of love
you can hug the puppy forever.