creation challenge: ashliana

[ineffabelle]

spinning spinning
sidereal sister
clear water bell ringer
she loves the ripples
follows the moir(e|a)
(k)nots are pleasure
unravelling, her game

throwing pins
into the distance
measured echoes
in the wind

"precision polly"
pares the paper
cutting thinner
finding treasure

wide with wonder
fierce and firey
becoming hers(elf)
every day

Comments

[ashliana.livejournal.com]

Belated comment, but I appreciate the depth of this poem both in general and as it applies to me. Good job. :)

How long did that take you to write, anyway?

[ineffabelle]

A while, it was a long time ago, so I don't remember exactly, but I thought about all of them a long time.

And thanks!